” A Pale Green Mermaid Blog “
There was a full moon glazing the sky with slits of Halloween orange when Kaldea tentatively drifted between ripples forming on the damp steamy banks of the river. Her mind was still buzzing from the images that coursed through her synapses echoing screeches emanating from the hundreds of toucans nesting nearby. As the black water surrounded her lower lashes, Kaldea’s memories began to effortlessly steep into the edges of her conscious mind.
FROM Black Lotus Blossom Blues - Takes place somewhere in South America
Image Courtesy Of Google
( That first sentence doesn’t look right to me now… … hmmm… but I still like it…)
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I think you opened the story really nicely.
Good writing
Thanks, that is just the pep talk I needed to start editing!! Again…